Kpop Magazine Double Page Spread Comparing

This was the first attempt at making a double page spread and so when making it i had to do a lot of research about what a Double Page Spread was and since i was doing kpop my search was kind of difficult since there aren't that many picture of Kpop Double page spreads and so making it i used pictures form online because i didn't know it had to be my own pictures and so i didn't know there had to be columns for the text and so later on i changed this and a lot more. 

This is the remade version of my Double page spread and this has The Text in columns like most Double page spreads have and the text is also in a different font because it wasn't as readable and i also added more text and because its makes the reader want to read more or look for the text on the face and if they don't have time to read it or cant carry the magazine they can just go online to find it and then read more about it i also added page numbers because all double page spreads have them and i made some text green is because this is the text that suppose to stand out so either one of two things you look and remember that or you see that text and want to find out about it.